Laura Hay Poet Cinquain

Autum Stroll

Crisp crunch
Musical feet
Wind whistles, musty beat
Swirling and rustling of the leaves
Golden

Rustic
Falling to ground
More notes to make the sound
Feet sample tunes as we stroll
Trees mime

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Smita Kulkarni August 7, 2019 at 10:35 PM Short and sweet but very unique Laura! -Smita

Eric Ashford August 4, 2019 at 3:05 PM Nice Fall poem. Tactile musical tones throughout. Well done.

Sarban Bhattacharya September 17, 2016 at 9:25 AM A nice portrayal of relationship between man and nature, Laura. Laura Hay September 20, 2016 at 4:55 AM Thank you for stopping by Sarban and for your kind feedback. Warm regards, Laura.

Andrea Dietrich January 25, 2016 at 3:59 PM this is REALLY creative work. One of the best little poems I read this afternoon!! Laura Hay January 29, 2016 at 4:10 AM Thank you so much Andrea, i've not done anything lately, i've still got a few i could share, i need more time, work and home live is hectic just now! x

Sara Kendrick November 5, 2015 at 11:32 AM Enjoyed reading your creative and expressive work..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Thanks for stopping by..Your comments were uplifting,,Sara Laura Hay November 6, 2015 at 12:06 PM Thanks for stopping to read this Sara, i'm happy that you enjoyed this, warm regards, Laura.

Skat A October 29, 2015 at 9:10 PM Laura, Congratulations on your "Autumn Stroll win." Love SKAT Laura Hay November 1, 2015 at 3:02 PM Thank you for taking the time to drop by SKAT! Much appreciated, Kind Regards, Laura.

Kim Merryman October 29, 2015 at 1:23 PM I like the way you incorporated rhyme in your cinquain, Laura! Great rhythm! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Laura Hay November 1, 2015 at 3:00 PM Thank you for dropping by Kim and for your kind comments, much appreciated, kind regards, Laura.

James Inman October 27, 2015 at 10:22 AM Nicely written Laura, lovely poem. Laura Hay November 1, 2015 at 3:00 PM Thank you very much James ;)

Emile Pinet October 26, 2015 at 6:43 PM The words are magical and beautifully expressed in a sea of swirling phrases that dance upon the tongue. Emile. Laura Hay November 1, 2015 at 3:00 PM Thank you for your support Emile, much appreciated, kind regards, Laura.

Paul Callus October 24, 2015 at 5:28 PM Very beautiful, Laura...sound and sight being the main ingredients. An autumn stroll becomes a musical poem. Well done! ~ Warm regards // paul Laura Hay November 1, 2015 at 2:59 PM Thank you for both your encouraging comments Paul! I'm shocked i managed to get a place on both my recent contest entries, warm regards, Laura. Paul Callus October 27, 2015 at 2:40 PM ..and back again with merited congratulations!! A most worthy win, Laura:) ~ Regards // paul

Laura Leiser October 23, 2015 at 11:45 PM I love how you weave the senses into your poem, Laura! I definitely hear the crunching of the leaves :) Good luck in the contest from another Laura! Laura Hay October 24, 2015 at 4:26 AM Thank you for your kind comments Laura!! Warm rgds :)

Andrea Dietrich October 23, 2015 at 9:12 PM very nice, Laura! Laura Hay October 24, 2015 at 4:25 AM Thank you!! :)

Jan Allison October 23, 2015 at 2:36 PM beautifully penned Laura I can almost hear the crunch of the leaves with every footstep - good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Laura Hay October 23, 2015 at 2:49 PM Thank you very much Jan, your comments are much appreciated, warm regards Laura :)