Automodel

Flooding emotion, 
my intellect stalls. 
My ego grinds at futile ignition. 
My tongue, in low gear, sputteringly crawls 
slowly along in ailing condition. 
My expectations backfire complaint, 
exploding like rifle shot behind me 
(... no carburetion to thoughts in restraint).
In midst of a breakdown’s how you’ll find me.
However, 
adjustment’s a simple thing, 
and there’s not an overhaul required 
to make my mental engine purr and zing.
Improper combustion’s uninspired.
The timing of my points won’t misfire, 
when humor’s in tune with my desire.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 17, 2011 at 5:17 AM
I am so pleased to have had the pleasure to read your poetry this morning James Ph. Thank you for sharing it with us. Hoping you have a week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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