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Auto Have More Wine

Her daughter did pour, and then more, of wine. The goblet was tall and she filled it fine. The glass sort of tipsy — Well-tanked was the gypsy. A cop cut her off when she crossed the line. 12/26/2018 Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/27/2018 7:14:00 AM

So witty, Kim. I'm glad the cops are out there trying to make our roads a little safer on New Year's Eve. Best wishes in Shadow's contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/27/2018 9:33:00 AM

For sure, Carolyn! Thank you and hugs...Kim

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/27/2018 12:09:00 AM

Hilarity is your middle name, and you "do her well" Kim. Wonderful limerick.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/27/2018 6:46:00 AM

Thanks so much! Practice...practice...practice

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/26/2018 9:51:00 PM

Quite an entertaining limerick here! Love the interplay between the title and the verse. Nice one, Kim! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2018 9:53:00 PM

Thanks so much, Gershon!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2018 4:45:00 PM

This is cool, Kim. REcently I have been drinking red wine for its flavanoids and other healing properties. They say to imbibe only 5 oz. VERY difficult to do because it tastes so wonderful. But I am keeping to that!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2018 9:08:00 PM

Sounds great! I will have to start that. Thank you, Andrea!

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/26/2018 2:54:00 PM

LOL Good one Kim! :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/26/2018 2:59:00 PM

Thanks, Heidi! I’m having fun writing limericks today. This contest did not require meter so I took advantage. :)