Autmn Call

Fall autumn color play palletteable wonderland display September October. November spaces grace color interface nubile inways passing life fading fall. Malabika Ray Choudhury Poem contest Beauty of fall 9/19/21

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Susan Ashley

Date: 10/23/2021 7:39:00 PM

Dear DM, your Autumn imagery is expressed beautifully. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Mala's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/26/2021 12:20:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a lovely "Autumn Call" write. A pretty time of the year. Have a blessed day

Eve Roper

Date: 9/26/2021 11:12:00 AM

Great cool brisk feeling and imagery , congratulations on your win in Malabika's contest! Hugs Eve

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 9/26/2021 6:20:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Beautiful Merse - enjoyed ~ Mala

Robert Warlov

Date: 9/19/2021 6:01:00 PM

I would replace "interface" with "interlace", offering a higher cute quotient