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Aurora and Avalanche For Contest

Aurora
Arctic prancing prism
      Prize sky borne

          Blue hunts red
Green seeks safety mountains deep
         Ears yearn sound 

   Faithless Beloved
May javelins of light
   Freeze your joy

            Terrible splendor
Ice-pack this savage splintered heart
       Crush my bones to match

    Shout for me
Call down the avalanche
       As you leave

  Echo my name
Bury me in dazzle
     If you dare

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/30/2015 7:46:00 PM
Victoria, Congratulations on your win. SKAT
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Date: 4/28/2015 4:59:00 PM
oooh. I love those avalanche images especially at the end! Congrats on the winners' list.
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Date: 4/28/2015 2:50:00 PM
Victoria, Congratulations on your "Aurora And Avalanche" win.... LINDA
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Date: 4/27/2015 2:17:00 PM
Your descriptive abilities are marvelous in such few words a 7! Congratulations on your win! Blessings Eve
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Date: 4/27/2015 11:51:00 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 3/3/2015 3:05:00 PM
Powerful and dramatic Senryu poem, Victoria. A 7 from me :)
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Victoria Anderson-Throop
Date: 3/3/2015 3:20:00 PM
Thanks, Laura ,for taking the time to comment. I'm not very comfortable with this form, but am trying to be more adventurous than usual! V

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