Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Poet Tanka

Aurora and Avalanche

ice grows and loses
                                     track in the fossil forest
                                          in killing spree he
                                    does not know wife Aurora
                                 sad tears drop in rainbow scarf




Aurora And Avalanche - Poetry Contest
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Skat A April 30, 2015 at 7:48 PM RAJAT, Congratulations on your win. SKAT

Poet Destroyer A April 28, 2015 at 2:52 PM Rajat, Congratulations on your "Aurora And Avalanche" win.... LINDA

Eve Roper April 27, 2015 at 2:33 PM Very beautiful as always Rajat , your descriptive abilities are marvelous a 7! Congratulations on your win! Blessings dear friend Eve

Debbie Guzzi April 27, 2015 at 11:58 AM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Kp Nunez March 1, 2015 at 7:10 PM Beautiful tanka, Rajat my friend. You've really mastered these types of forms - encapsulating whole stories into compact few lines. 7. Hugs and smiles. :D Kim

Jack Ellison March 1, 2015 at 5:59 PM YUP!!! A WINNER! That's my prediction but don't take that to the bank!!! Cheers my friend!

Jan Allison March 1, 2015 at 4:33 PM I like your take on the theme - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx

Sara Kendrick March 1, 2015 at 2:49 PM Creative way to go for the contest..reads like a winner to me..Thanks for stopping by! At least the tears were in a rainbow scarf. Sara