Aurora

She danced across the heavens
 Whirling and twirling in delight
  She slid up and down creating images
  With delight she colored the sky
 She made no sound as she moved
  She sculpted as she danced
 Unique patterns unfolded
  the heavens became her canvas
  colors became more vibrant
 Her colors changed with each breath
 She danced merrily for hours on end
Until the final curtain was drawn
With the up coming dawn.

1/16/13

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John Posey

Date: 5/29/2013 5:49:00 PM

Chips of colored glass placed inside a lighted tube cannot match the effects you so masterfully present here. Beautiful, beyond description... But you came mighty close..... Jake

Debbie Duncan

Date: 2/12/2013 6:24:00 PM

This is a very nice image you paint here Phyllis,,,,, thank you for reading ' my family hair" yes hair skin and nails can tell a lot, I hope you are not sick these days ;}

Roy Jerden

Date: 2/8/2013 4:58:00 AM

Very nice image. It occurred to me that there are actually two auroras, borealis (northern) and australis (southern), maybe they are twin sisters, dancing on opposite sides of the sky. Cheers, Roy

Jack Ellison

Date: 1/22/2013 7:45:00 AM

Love the image you created... I visualized the heavenly scene as I read! Hugs, Jack

Heather Ober

Date: 1/21/2013 7:22:00 AM

Oh, this is beautiful. Fantastic job!

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/21/2013 11:14:00 AM

thank you Heather

David Williams

Date: 1/20/2013 8:33:00 AM

Phyllis an excellent picture, I like it...David

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/21/2013 11:14:00 AM

thank you David

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2013 8:38:00 PM

thanks for your several comments today and what you said about toiling sonneteer. you are a gem!

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/21/2013 11:14:00 AM

It is so much like all of us toiling to create and it hit the heart

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/19/2013 5:11:00 PM

Go Phyll go, this is a real good one! I wish I could see the aurora burealis!I'm faving it! Light & Love

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/21/2013 11:13:00 AM

thanks Deb for FAV. this poem of mine. I posted a clip on my face book page so hope you will have a look. Nature's fire works

Harry Horsman

Date: 1/19/2013 9:30:00 AM

this is wonderful poetry, Phyllis one feels one is there, to witness this .....

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/21/2013 11:12:00 AM

thanks Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/18/2013 10:41:00 PM

I saw it on your FB page. So beautiful. and I later saw your comment that it happens yearly. Do you always see it?

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/21/2013 11:11:00 AM

I think of them as nature's fireworks

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2013 11:42:00 PM

AGAIN, you have recreated a fantastic image of nature! I don't know much about Aurora. Is it a yearly event? And do you see it well from where you are? I really like this one!

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/21/2013 11:06:00 AM

yes it is yearly and we see usually in winter and summer.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/17/2013 11:42:00 PM

thanks for your comments today. And yes, you and I BOTH are great multi taskers I think.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/17/2013 3:54:00 PM

Very descriptive of the Aurora Borealis..Enjoyed reading this eve..It brightened my afternoon thinking of the colors..Thanks for stopping by..We are headed in for some cold tonight and tomorrow..Possible some ice or snow but not as much chance for us though in Central Georgia..Sara

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/21/2013 11:10:00 AM

thank you Sara We are at -30 and windchill of -41 today

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 1/16/2013 8:32:00 PM

Phyllis; This is beautiful, I can just close my eyes and picture it. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla

The Situation

Date: 1/16/2013 6:47:00 PM

something i've never seen. but you have given me some ideal that presently make me thing of moving rainbows.

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/21/2013 11:05:00 AM

thank you-glad it has given you ideas

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 1/16/2013 3:50:00 PM

magnificent write! Lori

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/16/2013 8:05:00 PM

thank you Lori

Debra Squyres

Date: 1/16/2013 12:10:00 PM

I've only seen images or an aurora..and they have all been breathtaking. Perhaps it is an Aurora sprite or fairy...or indeed an angel to dance such beauty with her breath. Enjoyed this very much !!

Phyllis Babcock
Date: 1/16/2013 8:07:00 PM

thanks Debra for your comments. Lovely thoughts of sprits, fairies or angels dancing to produce such a lovely site.