Sara Kendrick Poet Free verse

Aura On the Edge

Out next to the weeping willow
Half-full moon still shines in early morn
Amazingly the glow gets brighter
As the sun on the horizon rises

But the sun earlier was shrouded 
Obscure because of the fog and mist
The birds did not seem to mind at all
Their chirping was very shrill and brisk

The sun rises over the horizon
In a fireball of red- red this day
As the sun appears everything
Seems to speedily move on their way 

The clear light that is on the moon now
Much brighter with a glow that's silver
There's an aura on the very edge
That reveals it is time to go soon

Time for me  to go as well as moon
Duty calls...responsibility
The chores of the day to care for home
To see my families' needs are met

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Caroline Cécile Delacroix May 16, 2010 at 3:07 PM Great imagery of the start of the day, Sara, inspiring! Congrats on this poem being published. Best wishes, Caroline.

Derrick Burton May 16, 2010 at 6:50 AM wow this has a smooth flow to it, a Robert Frost feel who lately I've been loving to read alot of his work. Don't get it twisted you don't have his style personally I'm saying you got alot great poetry that you should compile in a book and sale them. Wish you luck with this awesome poetry and also in the future. :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 5, 2010 at 4:30 PM Wonderful words Sara and I so enjoyed your creative write tonight.. chirping still going on hear all through the night.. luv.. Linda-Marie

Daver Austin May 5, 2010 at 2:52 PM A little bit of heaven goes a long way, eh, Sara. You can't stay too long or the charm will be gone. LOve, daver

Carolyn Devonshire May 5, 2010 at 8:56 AM Sara, under the proposed House Bill you would not be able to grow anything in your backyard for your own consumption. I find the idea totally unamerican and am outraged. I enjoy growing veggies and having fruit trees. This is government intrusion at its worst! How will they enforce this if it passes? Will inspectors check out each individual's property? Have we no right to privacy anymore? Sorry, but I get steamed just thinking about it. Love, Carolyn

Ismael Nieves May 5, 2010 at 7:29 AM I can view through this script such wonderous transition.

Derrick Burton May 5, 2010 at 5:27 AM This poem is great, it moves forward as you read and you tell a wonderful story with your amazing pen and fingers. Also, have a great day. :)

Doris Culverhouse May 5, 2010 at 5:11 AM duty is our essence

Carolyn Devonshire May 5, 2010 at 5:04 AM Admire the way you sense your call to duty through the rising and setting sun and moon, Sara. Nicely done! Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A May 5, 2010 at 4:18 AM finally, i get to read something new, thank you Sara, i mean nobody has posted a new poem over an hour. glad to have read your poetry,..p.d.