Aum the Sound of Universe

Aum- the sound of universe..

Short summer gave a delicate hue to the enchanting overflowing unborn..
 there to my left I saw the horizon clean
 and undoubtedly smelled the transparent air 
 So collected for years..
 I saw myself sleeping straight on the waves of the ocean below
 And curls running across my flowing hair..

 Gripped in the sound of 'Aum',
 I felt the softness of the curly bubbles breezing into my quiet skin..
 the looseness I saw swinging and swimming all through the ocean and the universe victimized..
 Breaking the breath in one jerk,

 my conscience revealed the pureness in the pure 
 and sacrifice pictured,
 the white in the bright and 
 unvoiced, uncorded, unborn witnessed !

 Rashmi Pitre (published n copyright work)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Agustin Avatar
September 14, 2024 at 4:45 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Jay Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 12:27 AM
great description. I love the word choice.
Pitre Avatar
November 21, 2016 at 5:48 AM
thank u ..
Smith Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 5:35 PM
I love this Rashmi....a favorite
Pitre Avatar
August 20, 2016 at 10:57 AM
thank you :)
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