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August Thunderstorm

august thunderstorm
lightshow on the horizon
~ grumbling ovations



AP: Honorable Mention 2021

Submitted on June 27, 2021 for contest SUMMER HAIKU sponsored by TANIA KITCHIN - RANKED 3RD
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Kaufman Avatar
July 25, 2021 at 8:56 AM
what a great haiku. It's a real talent to be so potent with such few words.
Ashley Avatar
July 24, 2021 at 8:57 PM
The awesome beauty of Nature comes to life in your amazing haiku, Line. A sensory feast. Congratulations on your wonderful win in Tania’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Gauthier Avatar
July 25, 2021 at 4:11 AM
Thank you very much, Susan ~
Hoffman Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 2:30 PM
Stunning haiku! Congrats!
Gauthier Avatar
July 20, 2021 at 3:25 PM
Thank you, Franci. Much appreciated ~
Kauffman Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 10:12 AM
Beauty and the beast Line! Summer thunderstorms are an amazing sight! Love the ku! Still smiling. Summer blessings!
Gauthier Avatar
July 6, 2021 at 11:42 AM
Thank you so much, Sam ~
Agustin Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 6:20 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Gauthier Avatar
July 5, 2021 at 11:39 AM
Thanks, Beata ~ much appreciated
Andresen Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 12:10 PM
- Congratulations on your win ~ enjoy the summer :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
July 4, 2021 at 6:38 PM
Thank you, Sunshine ~ most appreciated.
Merryman Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 8:18 PM
I love this haiku, Line, especially that last line! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Gauthier Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 8:43 PM
Thank you very much, Kim ~
Sambourne Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 5:24 PM
A stirring Haiku with a delightful + creative final line. Congratulations! Best wishes, Brian
Gauthier Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 8:43 PM
Thanks, Brian ~
Kitchin Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 1:30 PM
Line, congratulations on your winning placement, wonderfully creative!
Gauthier Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 8:44 PM
Thanks, Tania. Most appreciated ~
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 10:14 AM
amazing imagery, dear. Gosh, I think I never saw so many good haiku on one winner list as I am seeing today. congrats to you in the top three placement group.
Gauthier Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 8:44 PM
Much appreciated, Andrea ~
Alex Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 9:58 AM
Beautiful. Congratulations!
Gauthier Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 8:43 PM
Thanks, Christuraj ~
Ball Avatar
June 30, 2021 at 6:23 PM
Lovely Line. I do love a good rain and the thunder and lightning makes it even better for me. God Bless, JB
Gauthier Avatar
July 3, 2021 at 8:43 PM
Thanks, Judy ~
Mays Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 8:24 PM
Very clever wording. Love this.
Gauthier Avatar
June 29, 2021 at 9:46 PM
Thank you very much, Carol ~
Cunningham Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 12:46 AM
You captured it well in your haiku Line, saw some brilliant ones in Florida a few years ago. Hope you have a lovely week. Tom
Gauthier Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 5:26 AM
Thank you so much, Tom. Have a great week ~
Hankins Avatar
June 27, 2021 at 7:34 PM
Superb haiku, Line. I could hear the grumbling overhead.
Gauthier Avatar
June 28, 2021 at 5:26 AM
Thank you very much, Milton ~
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