Notes About The Poem

August Evening

Pink, gold and purple
at the verge of baby blue
Soft, twilight birdsong
Flickering fascination
in the glow of green fireflies

Weary day gives way
to cool night's diamonds and pearls
and pervading scents
Lush evening, dripping colors
Darkens, in the awed stillness
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Dietrich Avatar
January 29, 2023 at 9:02 AM
Gorgeous imagery, Evelyn.
Buehler Avatar
January 29, 2023 at 11:14 AM
Thank you, Andrea. :)
Wolf Avatar
January 26, 2023 at 6:46 PM
Thanks, Evelyn! I really needed this. It's been snowing non-stop for almost 30 hours in Chicago as I write this. Cheers, gw
Buehler Avatar
January 26, 2023 at 9:14 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed this, Gershon. Thank you very much for letting me know. My very best wishes, Evelyn :)
Kendrick Avatar
January 26, 2023 at 11:48 AM
Very descriptive and expressive lines you have penned in this one. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara
Buehler Avatar
January 26, 2023 at 4:25 PM
Thank you so much, Sara.
Buhagiar Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 11:01 PM
Two lovely tankas. Perfect imagery.
Buehler Avatar
January 26, 2023 at 10:56 AM
Thank you for the joy of your appreciation.
Legros Kelley Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 7:22 PM
You paint awesome beauty with your words Evelyn, this is just incredible :)
Buehler Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 10:41 PM
Thank you so much for the pleasure of your comment, BJ. :)
Poet Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 5:52 PM
Oh, this is so good, I could feel every word and miss those shades and scenes of Summer. well done Evelyn.
Buehler Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 6:33 PM
Your words bring deep delight Lasaad. Thank you very much. :)
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