August

August sits back, his work is nearly done.
Contentment shows; he can afford to smile.
He brought us measured rain and golden sun,
helping crops; never failing to beguile.
Thawed out and gladden hearts, if for a while.
Through his hard work our fields will feed us still, 
as we bale and store for December's chill.
He's made us sweat, but we forgive, for this
is his true role and nature's solemn will -
He's earned eleven months of quiet bliss.

Written 30th August 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 6:08 AM
I love the unique way you have personified August as male and not female:-) I really loved this clever rhyme, David good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx7
Lindsay Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 9:57 AM
Thanks a lot Jan, hope you've entered too? x
Stebbings Avatar
August 30, 2016 at 5:40 AM
I like this piece of Personification written as a Dizain, David. Well written. #7 Barry.
Lindsay Avatar
September 2, 2016 at 9:56 AM
Thanks VERY much, Barry :)
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