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                                                         7 August 2023

Contest: Welcome August Acrostic.                              Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

 

 

August

As the lion makes way for the virgin
Usurped is the crab of July
Green are the forests and valleys
Under cerulean sky
Sun, sea and sand… and bikinis 
That’s August, let’s grasp it and fly!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ashley Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 5:22 PM
Dear Terry, a beautiful portrait of August. Wonderful vibes and rich imagery. Congratulations for your excellent win in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Flood Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 10:52 AM
Thank-you, Susan. An unexpected but welcome win.
Kauffman Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 10:09 AM
Congratulations on your first place win, Terry! Your acrostic does indeed "fly" and soar with the joy of August! Blessings of August joy to you!
Flood Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 11:16 AM
Thanks, Sam, glad you enjoyed
Miller Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 3:16 AM
Fun Acrostic; congratulations
Flood Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 11:14 AM
Thanks, Terry. Appreciated
Goldsmith Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 9:47 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative/fun write/read. August is almost gone and so is the summer. Have a great day.............
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 7:04 AM
- Congratulations on your top beautiful winning poem in the Autumn contest, Terry :) -
Flood Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 11:14 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise. Glad you enjoyed.
Roper Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 8:01 PM
top winner awesome acrostic , Terry.
Flood Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 11:12 AM
Thanks so much, Eve
Merryman Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 7:40 PM
Terry, I can see why you won 1st place with your August acrostic! So creative and enjoyable! Congrats on your top win! Blessings, Kim M
Flood Avatar
August 28, 2023 at 11:11 AM
Thanks Kim. I was certainly well chuffed. Terry
Canerdy Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 2:24 PM
Excellent, Terry. A huge CONGRATS on your top win. Janice
Flood Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 2:56 PM
Thanks, Janice, I was pretty chuffed with this unexpected win… I rarely manage to write anything in six lines!
Radice Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 1:07 PM
Congratulations Terry. Sadly, August has been only Sun, sea and sand... and umbrellas where I live. Cheers - Gary
Flood Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 2:51 PM
Ain’t it so, Gary? Global warming… phooey. Thanks for the congrats. Terry
Fowler Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 10:59 AM
Cute for August Terry. Too hot here to be at the beach today. LOL Congratulations on your winning placement! :)
Flood Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 11:07 AM
Thanks Linda. In the UK, we’ve almost forgotten what ‘too hot’ feels like.
Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 10:06 AM
this for me is the spirit of August, and as I am fond of the Zodiac, it was really cute how you incorporated the signs of three of them. The before, during and after of August. That's why you got first place. Congrats
Flood Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 11:04 AM
Crikey, Andrea. I wasn’t actually sure this would appeal to you, so I would have been happy with a ‘place’. So I’m delighted with a first place. Thanks so much.
Wolf Avatar
August 15, 2023 at 7:26 PM
Bzzzzzzzz. (I'm the fly).
Flood Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 11:13 AM
Apologies for missing this comment, GW, so a belated thank-you to you…. Now where’s my swatter?
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