August

Assuage the scorching heat I pray.
Unleash the heavens’ clouds to burst.  
Grant the winds that will cool the day.
Unfurl the skies with rains disbursed.
Send gentle storms with vital spray. 
Thank you, God, for quenching our thirst.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ashley Avatar
September 4, 2023 at 6:45 PM
Dear Linda, your poetic plea is expressed with heartfelt beauty. A splendid poem. I hope an early Autumn brings you much deserved relief. Congratulations for your excellent win in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Fowler Avatar
September 5, 2023 at 7:10 AM
Hello dear Susan. Thank you. Interestingly, we had a bit of rain the day after Andrea posted contest results. hugs :)
Andresen Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 7:16 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem in the Autumn contest, Linda :) - hugs
Fowler Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 7:19 AM
Hey Anne-Lise...thank you for visiting and commenting! and for the congrats!
Merryman Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 8:16 PM
Very creative: an acrostic prayer! Nicely done, Linda! congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Fowler Avatar
August 27, 2023 at 7:18 AM
Many thanks Kim. :)
Canerdy Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 2:45 PM
Linda, to each line of your poem, I say "AMEN!" CONGRATS on your win. Janice
Fowler Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 3:11 PM
Hi Janice. Thank you for enjoying my poem and for the congrats!
Puddifoot Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 12:55 PM
an original idea to write the acrostic in the form of a prayer for rain - congrats on your win in the contest! :)
Fowler Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 3:11 PM
Many thanks Charlotte. As always, I appreciate your thoughtful comments!
Read Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 12:08 PM
Hi Linda we could do with a little more sunshine in London, no need for a rain dance over here.
Fowler Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 3:09 PM
Ha! Thanks John. Nice to see you here. :) I appreciate your visit!
Flood Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 11:22 AM
Congrats on your win Linda. But you’re praying for gentle showers while the UK appears to have acquired a monsoon season. Hmmm, what’s the opposite of a rain dance?
Fowler Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 11:46 AM
Ha Terry. I'm not sure of the opposite, but I go out early every morning and do a rain dance in the sprinkler while watering my plants. LOL Hey, thanks for the congrats! :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 10:42 AM
i like the idea of a short acrostic prayer. Very nicely done, Linda, and congrats in my contest
Fowler Avatar
August 26, 2023 at 10:58 AM
Thank you Andrea! With the excessive heat in Texas this summer, that's all I could think - the plants and animals are suffering here. Love the placement - thanks again! :)
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