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Auf Wiedersehen

A shaft of sunlight cleaves their reveries, and the spell evaporates, their fate is sealed, their goose is cooked! Morning-mouthed, bedraggled, the reality of day makes for a rude awakening and reluctantly they say auf wiedersehen.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/27/2009 11:40:00 PM
I laughed with Their goose is cooked...Raul
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Date: 3/24/2009 4:44:00 PM
This is wonderful from start to finish. I appreciate the bit of humor(goose is cooked!) wich is othersise deep and speaks of the human condition...BG
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Date: 3/24/2009 9:51:00 AM
Dear Keith, The more I read YOU the hungrier I become for YOUR POETIC fulfillment ALWAYS ...HG
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Date: 3/24/2009 7:27:00 AM
There is poem on poetry.com by david smalling called Dambu Lui Gaf, it joins with this for pure excellence of depth and vision. Thanks for defending the miseducation of the negroes, I just do what muse has enslaved me to do. Love, your constant friend
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