Audience Falls Silent

The audience falls silent last night
When my songs shine a bright light.
Some fearless folks with fight or flight
Some dearest darlings with delight

My songs were last in line,
The other songs were fine.
Yet mine were like red wine
You drink it, you’re divine.

My voice never missed the bull’s eye
It breathes the blackbird’s peaceful sigh. 
That could explain how they comply
To the sound of void they rely

The audience remains silent still
Could it be chills or just some skill?
How were these poor faces so thrilled?
My songs are done, the theatre’s filled.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Romios Avatar
October 25, 2021 at 7:13 AM
Mark..are you really a performer? Audiences can be tough Pangie
Bartolo Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 1:32 PM
Yes. I'm a singer songwriter. I also play guitar and sax
Mcconnell Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 8:29 AM
Fine piece Mark, with really good rhyme and flow throughout. Blessings, Gordon
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