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Au Revoir

Au Revoir ma cheri amor I feel you pulling away and knew that the words calling you back are no longer mine to cry out moments and memories blurred visions of yesterday that which I held as our forever no longer part of my tomorrow I watched you drift away intimately knowing that I was to take a separate path irish

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Allie Lusha

Date: 3/6/2010 3:59:00 AM

So visual and heartfelt....Allie

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/28/2009 4:34:00 PM

Yes we can feel it when the other person no longer loves the same. Keep the magical pen flowing. Sara

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/18/2009 5:07:00 AM

IRISH (Michael) Whatever happened to forever? Oh, how my soul misses... It seems to be lost in dreams of greener pastures only to find in the end that grass tastes the same unless it has been nurtured... And moving on is NOT always easy. Your words are wonderful. Drifting away is like helplessly trying to catch a plastic bag caught by the wind and flying to a tree top... out of reach. Thanks for the mental journey enjoyed because of your words, today. An excellent write. Lovingly, Dane Ann

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/6/2009 9:38:00 PM

Beautiful sentiment and so intense your love for your wife.. never experienced that kind yet.. I think I am too fickle.. Soup Mail check..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/1/2009 7:49:00 AM

It's so sad to see love "drift away," Michael. All we can do is cherish the memories of happy times when our loved one chooses to "take a separate path." Very nice! Love, Carolyn