Au Revoir

au revoir to light of painted day strong enough if one could only say we can't say no we can't say so we sing in notes and keys of love and life and liberty broken trains _of thought those we need and those we sought after and after, the storm where unicorns gallop amongst moisten fields where we feel when we go down where we rise up and up, and up the wonder, we wander and we daze the sun amid the haze au revoir to the moon the dark too soon living thru another afternoon embraced her winds winding across my face wafts of apple plum I water and I'm done outstretched and open chapters turn I don't run your match ignites I burn from the outside moving in smoke kissing the sky your beauty bending ever near the mockingbirds take flight all does disappear
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Date: 3/28/2020 8:48:00 PM
Very 5th Dimension Schmidt. Last seven lines of your poem, the most beautiful.
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Date: 3/30/2020 5:16:00 AM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sB6HY8r983c
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Date: 3/29/2020 11:38:00 AM
Morning waits after a night of smooth sultry jazz
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Date: 3/28/2020 8:56:00 PM
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/148503/all-in-green-went-my-love-riding
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Date: 3/28/2020 8:51:00 PM
https://songofamerica.net/song/in-spring-comes/
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http://www.poemdujour.com/cummingsNow.html
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