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Attic Windows

In attic windows The miracle of night sky Amazed lying on A hand-made quilt protected Against the cold night of stars

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/29/2017 8:52:00 PM
A great Tanka poem John. The vast universe is so inspiring to watch.
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Date: 1/29/2017 11:44:00 AM
It's strange... I thought I had commented on your tanka, but maybe I only dreamt I had 0.o .... This is a beauty of a tanka. Also in my mind I see the night sky with stars as a quilt also. I like it.
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