Attic Windows

In attic windows
The miracle of night sky
Amazed lying on
A hand-made quilt protected
Against the cold night of stars
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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January 29, 2017 at 8:52 PM
A great Tanka poem John. The vast universe is so inspiring to watch.
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January 29, 2017 at 11:44 AM
It's strange... I thought I had commented on your tanka, but maybe I only dreamt I had 0.o .... This is a beauty of a tanka. Also in my mind I see the night sky with stars as a quilt also. I like it.
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