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POETRY IS IN THE HOUSE Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud Written 11/9/2025

ATTIC


dusty room full of junk; 
creaking wooden floorboards. 
small dollhouse, somehow shrunk, 
lies nestled, treasured time. 
aging, darkened ember; 
old, beat -up wooden trunk.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Miller Avatar
November 14, 2025 at 12:21 AM
Wonderful take on the theme love "somehow shrunk", congratulations
Rodrigues Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 12:17 PM
Enjoyed! Congrats!
Dietrich Avatar
November 13, 2025 at 10:53 AM
Amazing one on attic. I am loving these winning poems. Congrats
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 5:32 PM
fabulous contest entry...written to the specifications. nicely done.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 10, 2025 at 12:22 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "ATTIC" write. "Good Luck"  I also did "ATTIC."  Hope you are OK.... Have Autumn Blessings As You Write Away.............
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