Atthis: a Sapphic Ode 1

(Hardly anything is known about Sappho, but no-one seriously 
doubts her greatness as a poet.  She lived on the Greek island 
of Lesbos (hence “Lesbian”) in the seventh century BC. All that 
has survived of her work is a scattering of scraps, but even this 
meagre evidence establishes her as one of the foremost poets 
of all time.)

I.	
Waking at dawn, 
with lilac boats of cloud 
threading through heaven's 
cool aquamarine 
like afterthoughts of night, 
I yearn to sing of you 
as prettily as I can, 
to do you honour, Atthis, 
and give pleasure to our friends. 

Dawn crept into our room 
in her sandals of gold 
and, stooping over the bed, 
kissed me free of sleep's lax bonds. 

This life of ours is brief, Atthis, 
so let us love without restraint. 
We, two vermillion hyacinths, 
lending our grace to a mountain path, 
should blaze before 
some shepherd, unknowing, 
treads us underfoot 
till all of us that remains 
is a red stain in the sand. 
It is a short flight 
from dawn to night, 
but do not despair, my love. 
We will bestow it yet 
with a thousand beauties. 

I love everything that 
caresses me. I love the hot wind 
redolent of wild thyme, 
and the strong, gentle hand 
of the sun on my breasts. 
I love the honesty of mountain water 
and the gorgeous bloom 
which freshens the gnarled gorse, 
surprising him with happiness. 
And yes, I love you too, Atthis, 
with buttercups in your hair.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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March 12, 2017 at 10:43 AM
Oh my.... What is it you want me to say about this. You must know yourself how good this is, don't you?
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March 12, 2017 at 11:54 AM
I love it when someone is honest, thank you :)
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March 12, 2017 at 11:44 AM
hehehe Yes, I know.
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March 12, 2017 at 10:45 AM
And I loved you, Atthis, so long ago..... "This life of ours is brief, Atthis, // so let us love without restraint. "
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March 12, 2017 at 9:38 AM
Oh, this is great, that you 'did' Sappho! No this is not a comment yet, only a yell of joy because I love her poetry. I'll be back later to comment, have to do chores here first, yeck :)
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March 12, 2017 at 10:17 AM
LOL I'm fending off the chores by playing with poetry.
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