Notes About The Poem

Attenuating Circumstances

round and round everything's swell
without a hitch things seemed to go...
then suddenly an awkward hiccup



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: 3rd place 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Baker Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 3:17 PM
There's always a hiccup. I like it, Line. Have a good day my friend! Bill
Gauthier Avatar
June 11, 2023 at 2:14 PM
Thank you so much, Bill. Much appreciated ~
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