- Attention -

Some love the spotlight --- when the power goes out they panic




Sponsor Broken Wings
Contest Name Monoku Form
Deadline 4/1/2014 12:00:00 AM

(4th in the contest)


08.12.2013
A-L  Andresen :)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Nance Avatar
August 23, 2014 at 8:48 AM
Wow, you enter this one in the quotes contest going on now. this is awesome :) :)
Andresen Avatar
August 23, 2014 at 1:17 PM
- It's too late ..... but thanks, Casarah :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
A  Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 10:14 AM
Anne .. Congratulations with your one amazing line....~SKAT~
Andresen Avatar
March 15, 2014 at 11:37 AM
- Thanks for visiting and greeting,Skat. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Ligon Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 3:18 PM
Nice one-liner. I enjoy the visual. Congrats and poetic hugs!
Andresen Avatar
March 14, 2014 at 4:01 PM
- Thanks for visiting and greeting,Juliet. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 5:00 PM
This is a superb monoku. well done, // paul
Andresen Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 3:38 AM
- Thank you for your attention, Paul. :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 8:36 AM
I love it! What a great line, congratulations.
Andresen Avatar
March 12, 2014 at 9:12 AM
- Thanks for visiting and greeting,Richard. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Watkins Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 5:17 PM
This one made me laugh. Well done and congratulations!
Andresen Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 4:02 AM
- Thanks for visiting and greeting,Gary. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 5:07 PM
Love this one! Congrats for your win.
Andresen Avatar
March 11, 2014 at 4:01 AM
- Thanks for visiting and greeting, Andrea :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Torres Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 3:37 PM
Congratulations on your fine win, Anne Lise!!! ... too many people are guilty of this poem.. good job!! ^__^
Andresen Avatar
March 10, 2014 at 4:29 PM
- Thanks for visiting and greeting, AiyaH !! (I had forgotten this contest :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Dome Avatar
January 8, 2014 at 3:47 PM
So true. hope you won. take care Pete.
Andresen Avatar
January 8, 2014 at 3:49 PM
- Thank you for your attention, Peter. :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Guzzi Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 3:54 PM
So true, they draw energy from others, energy vampires [wince] this reads like a winner. Light & Love
Andresen Avatar
January 4, 2014 at 6:44 AM
- Thank you for your attention, Debbie. :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Dunn Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 2:13 PM
This poem has a nice simply beauty to it liked it. cheri
Andresen Avatar
December 20, 2013 at 2:16 PM
- Thank you for your attention, Cherl. :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Bryant Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 6:26 AM
Anne Lise, that was insightful and fun to read! Thank you for sharing, hope everything is well. :) Trevor
Andresen Avatar
December 17, 2013 at 7:25 AM
- Thank you for your attention, Trevor. :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Hendricks Avatar
December 13, 2013 at 6:55 PM
"Spot"-on, Anne Lise. Good luck in the contest, my friend. Licia :-)
Andresen Avatar
December 14, 2013 at 3:34 AM
- Thank you for your attention, Licia. :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Jones Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 12:58 PM
Great one Anne Lise.....true...so true..:-)
Andresen Avatar
December 12, 2013 at 12:59 PM
- Thank you for your attention, Donna. :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Uche O. Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 12:20 PM
Sure... and simple...
Andresen Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 12:24 PM
- Thank you for your attention, Chidozie :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Boyle Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 9:58 AM
Anne-Lise, love the simple truth in this.
Andresen Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 10:20 AM
- Thank you for your attention,Patrick :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Sirak Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 7:40 AM
So true. I like how you think!
Andresen Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 10:20 AM
- Thank you for your attention, Monterey :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 3:50 AM
more, more from you,. anne.. congrats on your recent wins!.. warm holidays to you. huggs
Andresen Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 3:51 AM
- Thank you for your attention, Nette :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Thirtyseven Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 9:38 PM
A great fun write. Best of luck with the comp.
Andresen Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 3:30 AM
- Thank you for your attention, Scott :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 5:25 PM
very good Anne Lise you said it all great pen gl in contest Shadow x smile hug
Andresen Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 3:29 AM
- Thank you for your attention, Shadow :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Carroll Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 3:43 PM
Hi Anne, Well penned friend girl..It received my complete attention! Ken
Andresen Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 3:28 AM
- Thank you for your attention, Ken :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Hunter Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 2:18 PM
Anne, this is clever. I can think of a few people this describes.(more than a few) It's great!
Andresen Avatar
December 11, 2013 at 3:28 AM
- Thank you for your attention, Caleb :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Liwayway Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 7:17 AM
I agree with you friend Anne. Very awesome Monoku :) Get well soon and advance Merry Christmas!! thank for always for your support. huggsss :)
Andresen Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 12:16 PM
- Thank you for your attention, Maria :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 12:02 AM
oh yes, this is GOOD.(you should just lose the word "get" in front of panic, but the message is still great).
Andresen Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 4:30 AM
- Thank you for your attention, Andrea :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Melugin Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 5:22 PM
Anne-Lise....A phrase to praise.....stay safe and warm in beautiful Norway! chuck
Andresen Avatar
December 10, 2013 at 4:29 AM
- Thank you for your attention, Chuck :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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