Get Your Premium Membership

Attendants

Attendants Attendants once were happy in the ancient mansion Made of sand and granite by the cliff How fortuitous to be employed in these harsh times Tending to the mundane chores and sober orders The rule of life for functionaries is to fulfill the reasonable requests I guess things must have changed in history between the shadows The help demand more benefits and pay My servants used to bring me, one vitamin for breakfast Champagne or absinthe were always there to wash it down I had one worker for each arm and leg The four of them became uniquely useless So what if I forgot their names and birthdays They still get paid and have definable obligations Incongruities and inconsistencies will not be tolerated Attendants are attendants one and the same Now they play all day Overlook the cliff at ships and crashing waves below Sometimes all four gather shells down there and swim the shallows Or gather pine cones to throw around into tomorrow In their spare time they take me out like trash One of them on each arm and leg and toss me in the yard Being old and feeble I cannot walk or get around myself I get by on rain water and bugs that happen by The servants have taken over the old gray mansion They copulate inside and left me here to die Entered Contest on - 12/05/14 - "ONE OF YOUR BEST" - Poetry contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 1/20/2015 5:41:00 AM
Thought provoking write, congrats on he win, Earl
Login to Reply
Schumacker Avatar
Earl Schumacker
Date: 1/20/2015 11:06:00 AM
Hi Dr. Mehta. Thanks! I enjoyed your winning poem as well. Have a great day. Earl
Date: 1/19/2015 11:17:00 PM
Glad that i read this marvel of urs Earl! Congrats on big win!
Login to Reply
Schumacker Avatar
Earl Schumacker
Date: 1/20/2015 3:30:00 AM
Good morning Dr. Sharma, Thank you so much for your kind words. I am glad that you enjoyed it. It is one of my personal favorites. Have a great day. Take care. Earl
Date: 1/19/2015 2:52:00 PM
Glad you chose this poem Earl so I could read it again. Congratulations on your win.
Login to Reply
Schumacker Avatar
Earl Schumacker
Date: 1/19/2015 3:32:00 PM
Hi Brenda, Thank you so much. I enjoyed your winning poem also. Have a wonderful day. Earl
Date: 12/1/2014 1:32:00 PM
This is very deep and dark Earl master and servants - I wonder who is happiest? Great descriptive write:-) Hugs jan xxx
Login to Reply
Allison Avatar
Jan Allison
Date: 12/1/2014 1:54:00 PM
I would hate to be either party in your poem lol:-) Hugs jan xx
Schumacker Avatar
Earl Schumacker
Date: 12/1/2014 1:52:00 PM
Hi Jan. Thank you. I think the 4 copulators are happier because they have an activity. The old man eats bugs. That can't be fun. I hope you enjoyed it. I simply wanted to create an image that touches on the rich and poor of the world. In reality both have their struggles. We call it the "human condition." Have a wonderful day. Earl
Date: 11/30/2014 6:28:00 PM
A 7, Earl, well penned & imagery Blessings eve
Login to Reply
Schumacker Avatar
Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/30/2014 6:35:00 PM
Hi Eve, Sorry about that. I got distracted while writing to Brenda and sent you her msg. I appreciate your kind words and encouragement. I am glad you liked my poem. Thank you so much Eve. Take care. Earl
Schumacker Avatar
Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/30/2014 6:29:00 PM
Hi Brenda, Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to write. I have the "Martha and Gracie" poem coming out tomorrow. It is a little stranger, perhaps a little more sardonic than this one but still amusing. Have a great night. Thanks again. Earl
Date: 11/30/2014 2:31:00 PM
Wow, what an imagination you have Earl. I love it. It was fun to read.
Login to Reply
Schumacker Avatar
Earl Schumacker
Date: 11/30/2014 6:31:00 PM
Hi Brenda, Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it. It was fun to write. I have the "Martha and Gracie" poem coming out tomorrow. It is a little stranger, perhaps a little more sardonic than this one but still amusing. Have a great night. Thanks again. Earl

Book: Shattered Sighs