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Attempts At Haiku - II

I am not the sun Which your world revolves upon; To you, I'm nothing. - Such classic beauty As hers aglow that Venus Would die of envy.

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Date: 6/22/2012 4:17:00 AM
Perhaps "Successes at Haiku" would be a more appropriate title... nice... Terry
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Date: 6/21/2012 7:35:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your haiku tonight.
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