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Attempt At Triolet

I wrote this immediately after discovering the rhyme scheme of a triolet. It is not close to my heart and I put less than 3 minutes in to writing it. So, any advice or critique will not hurt my feelings lol. Cheers to testing the water Cheers to my first, ever, triolet I’m out on a limb Here’s to getting my feet wet Cheers to my first, ever, triolet No matter, how bad, it’ll be my best yet I kept steady, my pen Cheers to my first, ever, triolet I’m out on a limb

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Sherilynn Kucharek

Date: 2/19/2019 10:06:00 AM

This is so charming, Anna! I enjoyed it very much! I smiled all the way through. This is top on my list of favorite forms. Awesomeness.......Sherilynn

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/27/2019 6:57:00 PM

Lovely, Anna. Just because you didn't have to rework it for hours doesn't mean it's not a gem. It's light and fresh ... and delightful.

Eve Roper

Date: 1/27/2019 5:37:00 PM

Nicely done, Anna, It is always fun to try new forms. Hugs Eve ~`*