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Attempt at triolet

I wrote this immediately after discovering the rhyme scheme of a triolet.  It is not close to my heart and I put less than 3 minutes in to writing it.  So, any advice or critique will not hurt my feelings lol.  Cheers to testing the water

Cheers to my first, ever, triolet
I’m out on a limb
Here’s to getting my feet wet
Cheers to my first, ever, triolet
No matter, how bad, it’ll be my best yet
I kept steady, my pen
Cheers to my first, ever, triolet
I’m out on a limb

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 2/19/2019 10:06:00 AM
This is so charming, Anna! I enjoyed it very much! I smiled all the way through. This is top on my list of favorite forms. Awesomeness.......Sherilynn
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Date: 1/27/2019 6:57:00 PM
Lovely, Anna. Just because you didn't have to rework it for hours doesn't mean it's not a gem. It's light and fresh ... and delightful.
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Date: 1/27/2019 5:37:00 PM
Nicely done, Anna, It is always fun to try new forms. Hugs Eve ~`*
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