Atonement Broken a Love Tale of Menaka and Vishwamitra

Sage Vishwamitra 
deeper in penance
years has passed 
never opened his eyes 
sparkling like fire 
penance like unconquerable
Indra, the king of gods,
horrified overwhelmed 
steep spiritual rise of
tapasya would make 
sage very powerful 
even conquer heaven
anxious Indra sent Menaka, 
a beautiful dancer of his court, 
to earth break his penance
a celestial nymph  
spiritual powers. 
Youthful and vibrant
Viswamitra with his eyes closed
She sang, danced, 
garlands of fragrant flowers
put them around 
Vishwamitra opened his eyes 
O beauty of heaven
your  body shines
like a diamond flame, 
a spotless beauty
alike the moon’s.
a black-eyed beauty 
on the hill-top,
statuesque,
like a golden girl. 
The hill, its creepers,
its bushes, all flamed 
With the golden beauty
of the golden girl.
she appealed, 
O chief of the majesty
your tapas is magnificent
O my Lord
surrendered my whole to you
marry me, marry me,
What worked once,
may work again
Sage felt lust and passion
well up inside him 
saw her swimming naked 
lake near the waterfall. 
gave up penance to be with her 
made love for years together.
Menaka had come with a mission, 
but fell deeply in love 
two shared a passion 
experienced by none else
Vishwamitra came to know 
Indra's devious trick 
aware of Menaka's genuine love 
therefore,merely cursed her
separated from beloved forever. 
Menaka left for heavens 
she was pregnant 
a beautiful baby born
baby left at sage Kanva's ashram
           to be continued..............
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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