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Atonement

A branch breaks dried by the sun withers and dies thrown on the fire burning remains sweet pearls silver sparkling a terrible sadness enters the window a willow weeps pitter patter knocking sins came to visit last night blowing against the wind drooping heavy darkness putting right the wrongs was more than one could bare grey clouds rains burning trails of hurt shadows of reality a dream snatched away by judgement scratches on chamber walls weeps the willow entwines in limbs an inescapable embrace in one's own heart a sanctum darkened by wrong's lament mind's rumblings tells tales clouded thoughts chase the wind shadows shifting dark and light reality pays a visit in moon's grey glow seeking soul's atonement for what was done a heavy price reaped for burnt ashes and dusty remains impossible sleep rain's lullaby hush pitter patters against the pane a calming rage gives way to sweet nightmares of relief Written by: Liam McDaid & Kelly Deschler

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/12/2015 12:13:00 AM
It is a joy to write with you, my friend. I will be posting our next poem soon and looking forward to more co-writes in the future :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 5/20/2015 6:39:00 AM
it was great pleasure kelly writing this with you dear friend look forward to our next write wishing you a beautiful day pal
Date: 5/11/2015 3:35:00 PM
Hi Liam n' Kelly!This is a very dark and sad poem that you two have written here in this fine collaboration my dearest friend Liam.A very haunting poignant and sad write indeed!Very deep in my own heart I do feel your pain and terrible sadness Liam and I'm wishing you with all my heart and soul forever and always the best and better days for you to come filled with lots of sweet beautiful true love,beautiful dreams blessings smiles laughter and lots of warmth and sunshine.Keep your faith!The Lord is with you Liam.You're always in my prayers and everything.Truly a mighty golden pen!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 5/20/2015 6:37:00 AM
thank you kindly dorian for the beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Date: 5/11/2015 5:01:00 AM
- Must "sun" come back, to wipe away sad tears - Liam & Kelly, so sad poem: (((- Very well written !!! - I wish you both a beautiful new week .... with many smiles :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 5/11/2015 6:38:00 AM
your smile thank you dear pal really brightens up the day wishing you a blessed day anne lise passing you a smile

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