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Atoms and Evenings

Atoms and Evenings

Darkness and light was.
Upon primordial waters,
Divided.  Then, life…

© Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
     November 30, 2009

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December 1, 2009 at 4:06 PM

Profound poem! I really like the last line--leaves the reader with with something to think about. Much said in just three lines. Thank you for sharing them with us. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

December 1, 2009 at 11:16 AM

Wishing you a week blessed with love and inspiration Dane Ann. I am thanking you for posting your excellent poetry which I have enjoyed reading today. Love, Carol

Yoni Dvorkis

December 1, 2009 at 8:05 AM

Interesting haiku Dane. You use science and poetry in harmony, the darkness of evening, the division of the cell. Kind of cute in a way. Thanks for sharing.