Atoms and Evenings

Atoms and Evenings Darkness and light was. Upon primordial waters, Divided. Then, life… © Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen November 30, 2009

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Date: 12/1/2009 4:06:00 PM

Profound poem! I really like the last line--leaves the reader with with something to think about. Much said in just three lines. Thank you for sharing them with us. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/1/2009 11:16:00 AM

Wishing you a week blessed with love and inspiration Dane Ann. I am thanking you for posting your excellent poetry which I have enjoyed reading today. Love, Carol

Yoni Dvorkis

Date: 12/1/2009 8:05:00 AM

Interesting haiku Dane. You use science and poetry in harmony, the darkness of evening, the division of the cell. Kind of cute in a way. Thanks for sharing.

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/1/2009 5:14:00 AM

LOVE IT!! thanks for your comments. Hope you are well.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/30/2009 11:43:00 AM

Such a great look..I love the title. BG

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/30/2009 11:43:00 AM

Such a great look..I love the title. BG

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/30/2009 9:56:00 AM

Original Haiku Indeed,sweet Dane ann--Charma