Atoms

If we can't see atoms, are we sure they exist All the experts say yes, in fact they insist These invisible devils Confuse our brain pebbles Will I kill a bunch if I smash down my fist?

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/21/2021 4:13:00 PM

Hello Happy jack, i do not think i would like to eat an Atom. Would you? Love, Da\rlene xxxx-oooo.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/22/2021 6:25:00 AM

Hello Happy Jack, oh, I do not need a bad taste in my mouth. LoL.xxoo Darlene

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/21/2021 6:51:00 PM

No... they leave a bad taste in your mouth! LOL XOX

James Horn

Date: 7/21/2021 8:55:00 AM

will never catch up with you now that you have passed me and keep writing

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/21/2021 9:43:00 AM

BUT... I've slowed down recently! Posting much less frequently so now's your chance Sir James! Cheers...

L Milton Hankins

Date: 7/21/2021 8:15:00 AM

What an interesting conjecture. Will your fist go through the table (since they are both made with atoms?) Gee, I don't know but it could drive me crazy thinking about it.

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/21/2021 1:59:00 PM

Holy Cadoodle, you're almost as old as this old geezer!!!!! Will be 86 on August 11th OOOWWWEEE!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/21/2021 11:30:00 AM

79!

Jack Ellison
Date: 7/21/2021 8:50:00 AM

Watch out, don't hurt yourself my friend! Don't know how old you are BUT it can it can be life-threatening!!! LOL