Atoms

If we can't see atoms, are we sure they exist
All the experts say yes, in fact they insist
These invisible devils
Confuse our brain pebbles
Will I kill a bunch if I smash down my fist?

psychologicallimerick

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Darlene De Beaulieu

July 21, 2021 at 4:13 PM

Hello Happy jack, i do not think i would like to eat an Atom. Would you? Love, Da\rlene xxxx-oooo.

Darlene De Beaulieu

July 22, 2021 at 6:25 AM

Hello Happy Jack, oh, I do not need a bad taste in my mouth. LoL.xxoo Darlene

Jack Ellison

July 21, 2021 at 6:51 PM

No... they leave a bad taste in your mouth! LOL XOX

James Horn

July 21, 2021 at 8:55 AM

will never catch up with you now that you have passed me and keep writing

Jack Ellison

July 21, 2021 at 9:43 AM

BUT... I've slowed down recently! Posting much less frequently so now's your chance Sir James! Cheers...

L Milton Hankins

July 21, 2021 at 8:15 AM

What an interesting conjecture. Will your fist go through the table (since they are both made with atoms?) Gee, I don't know but it could drive me crazy thinking about it.

Jack Ellison

July 21, 2021 at 1:59 PM

Holy Cadoodle, you're almost as old as this old geezer!!!!! Will be 86 on August 11th OOOWWWEEE!

L Milton Hankins

July 21, 2021 at 11:30 AM

79!

Jack Ellison

July 21, 2021 at 8:50 AM

Watch out, don't hurt yourself my friend! Don't know how old you are BUT it can it can be life-threatening!!! LOL