John Lawless Poet Verse

Atomized Rainbow

Atomized Rainbow

Sun
creeping
through
foggy
atomized
rainbow
arch

daring
horizon’s
idle drabness

awaken
sweet brush

breathe
pigments
ecstasy
upon
joys
waking
world


6/27/2015

submitted to – Waltzing with color – Poetry contest
sponsor – Kim Merryman

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Poet Destroyer A July 23, 2015 at 12:01 AM John, Congratulations on your wonderful win. Always ~LINDA~

Sara Kendrick July 20, 2015 at 4:17 PM The Waltz has danced in rhythm and won!!! Way to go!! Congrats

Andrea Dietrich July 19, 2015 at 4:43 PM ahh, you did rainbow. I was wondering if it was allowed. You did it so well!! Congrats on the win.

Skat A July 19, 2015 at 3:27 PM JOHN, Congrats on your Waltzing with Color win. Love SKAT

Jan Allison July 19, 2015 at 5:26 AM many congrats on your win John:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Merryman July 19, 2015 at 12:18 AM Well done, John! Congrats on your placement and thank you for participating in my contest! Love, Kim

Lee Carter July 19, 2015 at 12:13 AM Love your rainbow ! Congrats on your win ~ lee

Njeri Hunjeri June 28, 2015 at 8:44 AM "awaken sweet brush" so all the beauty can be seen clearly. John I wish u the best in the contest