Atmospheric Pressure Premiere Contest Winner

Atmosphere stratified over billions of years
Envelopes the Earth with protective layers
Saves the life from damaging solar radiation
Controls the climate and its spatial variation
Burns meteorites or asteroids on their course
So the Earth doesn’t become another Mars.

Mountain peaks pierce invisible atmosphere
Air pressure becomes less and less up there
Clouds surge sink slow in low-pressure trough
Descend as rain and snow with winds rough
The air becomes thin with oxygen depletion
Climber’s heart struggles albeit in jubilation.

Let life lying low become the mountain high
Rise over dreary atmosphere to touch the sky
Reach the stratum where the pressure is low
You will unburden life leaving the load below
Ecstasy clouds would enter mind at elevation
Melt in your heart as rain of blissful exaltation.

August 25, 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 1/21/2021 4:09:00 AM
Lovely poem, Subimal ~
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Date: 9/5/2017 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Subimal, exceptional piece so well written. :))
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/6/2017 5:29:00 AM
Thank you so much. Roy.
Date: 9/5/2017 12:45:00 AM
Exceptional Subimal! Congratulations on your deserving First Place win! : )
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/6/2017 5:29:00 AM
Thank you, Connie for appreciating.
Date: 9/4/2017 8:17:00 PM
Big Congrats Subimal to win top. Best wishes
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/4/2017 11:17:00 PM
Thank you, Anisha.
Date: 9/4/2017 7:07:00 PM
Excellent writing on this subject! Congratulations on your 1st place.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/4/2017 11:17:00 PM
Thank you, Anita.
Date: 9/4/2017 3:30:00 PM
Congrats Subimal!
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Date: 8/25/2017 12:47:00 AM
Vivid narration. Wish you best for contest.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/25/2017 2:56:00 AM
Thank you, Anisha.
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