Premiere Contest WinnerAtmospheric Pressure

Atmosphere stratified over billions of years
Envelopes the Earth with protective layers
Saves the life from damaging solar radiation
Controls the climate and its spatial variation
Burns meteorites or asteroids on their course
So the Earth doesn’t become another Mars.

Mountain peaks pierce invisible atmosphere
Air pressure becomes less and less up there
Clouds surge sink slow in low-pressure trough
Descend as rain and snow with winds rough
The air becomes thin with oxygen depletion
Climber’s heart struggles albeit in jubilation.

Let life lying low become the mountain high
Rise over dreary atmosphere to touch the sky
Reach the stratum where the pressure is low
You will unburden life leaving the load below
Ecstasy clouds would enter mind at elevation
Melt in your heart as rain of blissful exaltation.

August 25, 2017
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Gauthier Avatar
January 21, 2021 at 4:09 AM
Lovely poem, Subimal ~
Pett Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 6:43 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Subimal, exceptional piece so well written. :))
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 5:29 AM
Thank you so much. Roy.
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 5, 2017 at 12:45 AM
Exceptional Subimal! Congratulations on your deserving First Place win! : )
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 6, 2017 at 5:29 AM
Thank you, Connie for appreciating.
Dutta Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 8:17 PM
Big Congrats Subimal to win top. Best wishes
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 11:17 PM
Thank you, Anisha.
Harris Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 7:07 PM
Excellent writing on this subject! Congratulations on your 1st place.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 11:17 PM
Thank you, Anita.
Pandit Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 3:30 PM
Congrats Subimal!
Dutta Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 12:47 AM
Vivid narration. Wish you best for contest.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
August 25, 2017 at 2:56 AM
Thank you, Anisha.
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