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Atmospheric Pressure Premiere Contest Winner

Atmosphere stratified over billions of years Envelopes the Earth with protective layers Saves the life from damaging solar radiation Controls the climate and its spatial variation Burns meteorites or asteroids on their course So the Earth doesn’t become another Mars. Mountain peaks pierce invisible atmosphere Air pressure becomes less and less up there Clouds surge sink slow in low-pressure trough Descend as rain and snow with winds rough The air becomes thin with oxygen depletion Climber’s heart struggles albeit in jubilation. Let life lying low become the mountain high Rise over dreary atmosphere to touch the sky Reach the stratum where the pressure is low You will unburden life leaving the load below Ecstasy clouds would enter mind at elevation Melt in your heart as rain of blissful exaltation. August 25, 2017

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Date: 1/21/2021 4:09:00 AM
Lovely poem, Subimal ~
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Date: 9/5/2017 6:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Subimal, exceptional piece so well written. :))
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Date: 9/6/2017 5:29:00 AM
Thank you so much. Roy.
Date: 9/5/2017 12:45:00 AM
Exceptional Subimal! Congratulations on your deserving First Place win! : )
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Date: 9/6/2017 5:29:00 AM
Thank you, Connie for appreciating.
Date: 9/4/2017 8:17:00 PM
Big Congrats Subimal to win top. Best wishes
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/4/2017 11:17:00 PM
Thank you, Anisha.
Date: 9/4/2017 7:07:00 PM
Excellent writing on this subject! Congratulations on your 1st place.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 9/4/2017 11:17:00 PM
Thank you, Anita.
Date: 9/4/2017 3:30:00 PM
Congrats Subimal!
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Date: 8/25/2017 12:47:00 AM
Vivid narration. Wish you best for contest.
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Subimal Sinha-Roy
Date: 8/25/2017 2:56:00 AM
Thank you, Anisha.

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