Atmospheric Pressure

my heart a jet plane
yours atmospheric pressure
air too thin for lift
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Wood Avatar
August 24, 2017 at 4:26 PM
OH! So sorry JB. I could be the density altitude is too high. Take her to the beach! Great haiku.
Kendrick Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 3:50 PM
Very creative write. That is really a fast heart. Keep writing. Sara
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