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Atmospheric Pressure

my heart a jet plane yours atmospheric pressure air too thin for lift

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/24/2017 4:26:00 PM
OH! So sorry JB. I could be the density altitude is too high. Take her to the beach! Great haiku.
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Date: 10/15/2009 3:50:00 PM
Very creative write. That is really a fast heart. Keep writing. Sara
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