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Atmospheric Discharge

Gigantic jets of Transient luminous light Atmospheric show

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 8/30/2009 10:52:00 AM
Beautiful. A fitting tribute to such a powerful force of nature! Katie
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Date: 8/29/2009 5:55:00 AM
me and daughter used to sit on deck and watch those lighting shows some fantastic imagery again my friend you are good at these short forms thanks for sharing keep up the great writng
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Date: 8/29/2009 12:11:00 AM
Awesome Haiku! Great imagery and a perfection execution of this style of poetry. Thanks for sharing this and for reading more of my poems. I am glad you like my poems and that it inspires you. Best, Caroline.
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Date: 8/25/2009 4:02:00 AM
Three lines saying and showing so much. Thank you for sharing your Haiku with us James. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/24/2009 6:37:00 PM
Nothing like a Summer storm. Vince
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Date: 8/24/2009 3:58:00 PM
Wow! What an image! I feel like I've been to the moon and back. Wonderful write, James. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/24/2009 1:13:00 PM
Interesting Haiku. Keep writing.
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Date: 8/24/2009 1:06:00 PM
beautiful description .... :)
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