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Atmospheric Discharge


Gigantic jets of
Transient luminous light
Atmospheric show



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Katie Mitchell

August 30, 2009 at 10:52 AM

Beautiful. A fitting tribute to such a powerful force of nature! Katie

Katherine Stella

August 29, 2009 at 5:55 AM

me and daughter used to sit on deck and watch those lighting shows some fantastic imagery again my friend you are good at these short forms thanks for sharing keep up the great writng

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

August 29, 2009 at 12:11 AM

Awesome Haiku! Great imagery and a perfection execution of this style of poetry. Thanks for sharing this and for reading more of my poems. I am glad you like my poems and that it inspires you. Best, Caroline.

August 25, 2009 at 2:58 PM

What an interesting perspective. I really like the second line and the use of alliteration at the end of it. Good imagery. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words on my poem. Karen