Atmosphere Above

atmosphere above

clear umbrella shields me not

from life's wind and tears.

 

(January 18, 2011  Wausau, Wisconsin)

(c) Copyright 2011 by Christine A Kysely, All Rights Reserved
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January 18, 2011 at 2:58 PM
I like the juxtasposition of the clear, visible skys above, and the scourging, listless wind which is invisible (we do not where it is or when it is coming). Our rosy lives can be derailed by trials, troubles that we cannot see coming. I was able to extract the full, deep meaning from this poem, and it was very enriching to me as a reader. Keep thinking and writing!
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