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ATMOSPHERE,

A lonesome dove feathered white. The branch strong, time light. ...no "wait". A dream. really blowing a sweet breeze. ...no "wait". A heart beat sitting in a tree, spirit like, ...no "wait". A rhyme. ...of atomosphere.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/13/2011 12:35:00 PM
nice change here, and another good one. enjoying your poems sir
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Date: 9/11/2011 1:39:00 AM
wow! marrio,, a lonesome dove.... sure love the line.. atmosphere.... a very nice setting... thank you for sharing,..p.d.
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