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Nothing is set in stone Feel the weight of the world Pressed against your aching bones Time is timeless Life is priceless Why bless the stress Let it go Bliss is simple Just take the weight Off those massive shoulders.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 2/19/2024 8:18:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/5/2016 3:12:00 PM

Michael, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV ** LINDA

... Gigno

Date: 9/7/2013 2:24:00 PM

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Linda Jackson

Date: 9/6/2013 2:10:00 PM

I like your poem and could feel the weight lift off my shoulders when reading it. Best wishes Linda