Atlas

Nothing is set in stone
Feel the weight of the world
Pressed against your aching bones
Time is timeless
Life is priceless
Why bless the stress
Let it go
Bliss is simple
Just take the weight
Off those massive shoulders.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 2/19/2024 8:18:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/5/2016 3:12:00 PM
Michael, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV ** LINDA
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Date: 9/7/2013 2:24:00 PM
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Date: 9/6/2013 2:10:00 PM
I like your poem and could feel the weight lift off my shoulders when reading it. Best wishes Linda
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