Atlantis Vacation

Bahama Mama palm trees,
The island’s blue skies,
Lime and blueberry umbrellas.

Pink coral rays rolling out 
A poetic zephyr of relaxation;
Massage of sun on shoulders.

Down we go, with the tubes,
Bumping walls, as water falls;
Playing seaweed footsie.

Approach of Autumn seas,
Stingrays and sharks of Atlantis,
Strolling in figure eights.

On the Royal’s 15th floor,
Entertained by Summer storm
and moonlit motifs on the shore.

Didn’t come close to sliding,
Beach wind calming,
Sipping my coconut rum.

Later three cherries float
in my runner, and a stranger
demands a fruitful repeat.

I don’t broach the subject
of cashing out; gambler, not;
Danger of sunken treasure.

Wrapped up this celebration;
a row of chairs, food to spare,
Hellos and Tatas. Wings lift, land.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Wolf Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 7:29 PM
First, our regular homes are 'underwater.' Now our vacation homes are too! What a world. lol. :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
August 29, 2026 at 7:42 PM
What a world it is!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 2:21 PM
delightful imagery that made the experience come to life.
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 2:49 PM
Thank you!
Rolland Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 2:16 PM
wonderful, you made me dream and travel, thanks you so much, waw
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 2:48 PM
I love it! Merci! Hugs
One Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 7:58 AM
Sounds amazing.. you really brought it to life here with your choice of words and the imagery they created... hope you are well my friend.. Best wishes...
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 10:19 AM
How are you, my friend! I’ve been quite busy but doing well. Thank you kindly, Silent!
Rodgers Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 5:10 AM
Dear Kim, a wonderful, immersive snapshot of a getaway. Delightfully evocative, rhythmic, and fun vacation poem! Blessings, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 6:29 AM
Thank you, dear Daniel!
Dietrich Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 7:23 PM
It sounds like one very cool vacation. I wonder if this was one of Soups challenges? Loved how the umbrellas were so colorful
Rodrigues Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 7:56 PM
Not for a challenge. Just having fun writing, my friend! Glad you liked the umbrellas. I took note of what was around me 😊 ❤️
Crandall Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 6:17 PM
I vicariously enjoyed this idyllic vacation!
Rodrigues Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 7:57 PM
So glad! You can enjoy it again and again! 🤔 😀
Hind Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 5:38 PM
this is so exciting! I would love to go on a vacation like that, I remember King's Dominion long ago- <3
Rodrigues Avatar
August 26, 2026 at 7:58 PM
We had fun, Paige! It was a nice place. ❤️
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