Atlantic Sea Dogs

Mommy my dearest,
Walking on the plank,
Sharks circle nearest,
Pirates shout their chants.

Watched by the eldest,
Eyes drawing blank.
Cries from the youngest,
As she hits the bank.

Laughters fill the deck, 
But not from the pirates,
Confusion hit the pack,
A shift in the climax.

Crews became silent,
Skies Turn  to darkness,
A deadly sign sent,
Appearance Sea goddess.

Knees hit the floor,
Proud men into cowards,
Now to even the score,
See the Sea dogs cowed. 

Mommy brought her pets,
Krakens and the killer whales,
Got their briggas wet, 
Frighten whore males.

Our colour changed, 
Beige to deep blue,
Cause great derange,
Retribution is upon you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Sietesantos Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 4:31 PM
I enjoyed this fascinating well-written story! Congratulations on your great win. BRAVO!
Onclaud Avatar
June 25, 2014 at 2:01 PM
uniquely quilled with a surreal tone, danesh.. sweet congrats!.. huggs
Morgan Avatar
June 30, 2014 at 1:01 AM
my sincere thanks
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