Atlante-An Girl of Blue

Shipwrecked, strewn
By a storm so vile
Drifting for days
On the oceans miles
 
Blistered and burned
Dehydrated, deaths thirst
Hunger that hurts
Now at my worst
 
I'm losing daylight
Darkness is near
Slipping, slipping
Unconscious
 
My eyes are opening
To a blinding white
Pillars of marble
Incredible sight
 
Standing beside me
A visioned view
Golden haired goddess
With a smile so true
 
Her breasts painted
In indigo blue
With golden shells
In perfect view 
 
Her torso not reflecting
Women i know
Circled shapes
On her ribs do grow
 
Sitting up
As i look around
Unfamiliar lands
Most different grounds
 
Window i stand
Amazed at the view i see
Buildings so grand
Awesome ships in the sea
 
Where am i 
I wonder to my self
No place i know
On this world called earth
 
An outsider i am 
To those who took me in
The same shape
And colour of skin
 
As i walk around 
With this girl of blue
Is this Atlante-an land
That has pulled me through
 
 
" Hopefully, the first of many poems on Atlantis "


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bird Avatar
July 9, 2009 at 10:19 AM
YOur creative pen swirls us into the depths of your amazing mind with that steady flow that just sweeps down the page.
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July 8, 2009 at 2:25 PM
Great imagination and descriptiveness. Sara
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