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Atheism

I used to believe in God, I did As I was growing up Being taught of heaven & love & peace To respect the man above!! But growing up I've realised, it's just a nasty scam Believing in a world which takes the lives of innocent children, women & man! They say if you look with your heart high above, you sense the ones you have lost But surely if that God man had any morals, they would be here no matter the cost? Lives being taken every day, some don't breathe or even get to grow up Too many go young, too many go in pain & too many don't even know It judges the fact if that God is so good, those innocents wouldn't even have to go! Yet their are murderers, rapists & worse, that are allowed to live nice & free Plotting who's next on deaths murder list, who has upset them this week! But nothing is done they still live & breathe, whilst creating crimes all the time Living like thugs & acting like them too, yet they're still breathing, living their life! So why would you worship someone who takes all the bests & leave all the bad to survive? While innocents strive to fight for their lives, just to apparently fill up his heaven, his home This is why I cannot believe that this God even really exists, a fairytale, a nursery rhyme, maybe even a myth Just Look into your own hearts people, would you take the good & leave the crime, would you prefer to live around Criminals & murderers? Than the good people that will cherish that time? So for me he will hale from some mans fairy tale until he realises what he does is wrong! If a person kills innocents he sent to jail n put to death, but gods doing the same but he's hailed as a saint, that's how messed up this world really is!!!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/12/2016 10:26:00 AM
this is deep write, so much to ponder on. thank you so much for posting this. This world just does not know yet... SKAT
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Date: 1/11/2016 11:26:00 AM
Trinity I applaud you penning your thoughts and beliefs, not caring how your piece will be received. Personally I can agree to disagree and that does not make either of us wrong. I could feel the anger in your words and all the sweet release!! let's Coexist!!! ~jill
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