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At Tunnel's End

 I see the light at tunnel’s end ~ My mind a funnel, I want to fly!
And touch the hope that’s oh so fleeting before it leaves romance behind.
I’ll soar through clouded remnants, ruins of dreams now aptly realigned
to prove my love undying, true, devotion that will make you sigh.
Like peaceful seas, serene and calm, I’ll be your shelter from the storm,
yet match your heat with fervent yearning, forever hungry for your form.
I see the light at tunnel’s end ~ My mind a funnel, I want to fly!




10/10/19
For Make it Seven Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Joseph May
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Kai Michael Neumann October 28, 2019 at 10:48 AM This is fantastic. Congratulations. Kind wishes, Kai Hello There October 28, 2019 at 12:46 PM Thank you so much, Kai ~ I really appreciate your visit and kind words :)

Andrea Dietrich October 22, 2019 at 5:04 PM your uniqueness paid off. BIG congrats at the top! Hello There October 22, 2019 at 7:37 PM Whew! Thank you so much, Andrea ~ so pleased it did :)

Vijay Pandit October 21, 2019 at 2:34 PM You shine my friend at the TOP of #1 on winner's list..back with congrats on your super win. Hello There October 21, 2019 at 4:43 PM Aw, a heartfelt thank you, my friend...

Paul Callus October 21, 2019 at 9:03 AM Romantic and flavoured with passion. A creative take on the chosen picture. Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul Hello There October 21, 2019 at 12:51 PM Thank you very much, Paul, for your kind words and congratulations ~ I appreciate it :)

Chris Green October 21, 2019 at 7:07 AM I see this one flew to the top spot in the contest. : ) Congrats my friend. Beautifully done. Hello There October 21, 2019 at 12:50 PM Thank you, Chris ~ I'm so happy for that. It was fun to go there with this :)

Jan Allison October 21, 2019 at 5:24 AM I LOVE your interpretation of the image, :-) Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Hello There October 21, 2019 at 12:49 PM Thank you so much, JAN :) I really appreciate the feedback :) hugs

Joseph May October 20, 2019 at 6:32 PM Beautifully penned HT, Congrats on your win Hello There October 20, 2019 at 11:17 PM Thank you soooo much, Joseph! I'm thrilled and honored to have placed in your contest ~ Thank you for the challenge and for considering this worthy amongst so many talented poets here on poetrysoup :)

Sandra Adams October 20, 2019 at 6:32 PM i told you this would be at the top, congratulations of your first place win my friend :) hugs Hello There October 20, 2019 at 11:18 PM You did say that, didn't you? lol. Thank you, Sandy, for all of your support and encouragement ~ I really appreciate it :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich October 15, 2019 at 3:29 PM you really interpreted this one differently from how I would have by the way you did your repeated lines. SOUPER job, HT!! I think it will soar in the contest. Hello There October 15, 2019 at 4:00 PM Thank you so very much, my friend!!

Jennifer Proxenos October 11, 2019 at 4:38 PM A sensuous write told in 7 lines - beautiful imagery and a great rhyme and rhythm to this creative write - well penned Hello There, Hugs, Jennifer. Hello There October 11, 2019 at 6:15 PM Thank you so much, Jennifer :) I really appreciate it ~ hugs :)

Richard Lamoureux October 11, 2019 at 8:32 AM You have made it a sizzling seven. Good luck in the contest. I expect this will do well. Hello There October 11, 2019 at 11:12 AM Thank you, Richard ~ I'm so glad you enjoyed this :)

Regina Mcintosh October 11, 2019 at 1:10 AM This is amazing. I love it - You've written a true inspiration and dreamy poem. It's just wonderful. God bless you with many more. Love and prayers, Gina Hello There October 11, 2019 at 11:10 AM Thank you so very much, my friend <3

Sandra Adams October 10, 2019 at 6:35 PM this is a gorgeous write for this image my friend, your rhythm in this one is perfect, word choices excellent...i am sure this one will be at the top of the list...:) hugs love it Hello There October 10, 2019 at 7:36 PM Thank you so much, Sandy!! I really appreciate it :) hugs, my friend

Vijay Pandit October 10, 2019 at 5:23 PM This is a superb depiction of the photo, HT..a wonderful rhythm to your rhymes..excellent write. Hello There October 10, 2019 at 6:12 PM Gosh, Vijay, I am thrilled that you think so ~ whew! Thank you so very much, my friend...

Heidi Sands October 10, 2019 at 2:56 PM This is so nice to read this afternoon! Beautiful HT! :) Hello There October 10, 2019 at 6:10 PM Thank you so much, Heidi! :)

Chris Green October 10, 2019 at 2:45 PM I don't know about them but this sure did make me sigh. I loved this. This poem has it's own melody that moves so smoothly throughout the lines. The theme is wonderful as well because love is something very special. Fly on my friend, spread your poetic wings and fly. Hello There October 10, 2019 at 6:09 PM Thank you so much, Chris ~ It means a lot to me that you shared your feedback on this. The premise may not be obvious but the elements in the picture are included, in a slightly different way. Thanks again, my friend.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart October 10, 2019 at 1:33 PM Oh wonderful flow and rhythm! Lovely poem. Good luck in the contest. xomo Hello There October 10, 2019 at 4:09 PM Thank you very much, Maureen! :)