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I see the light at tunnel’s end ~ My mind a funnel, I want to fly! And touch the hope that’s oh so fleeting before it leaves romance behind. I’ll soar through clouded remnants, ruins of dreams now aptly realigned to prove my love undying, true, devotion that will make you sigh. Like peaceful seas, serene and calm, I’ll be your shelter from the storm, yet match your heat with fervent yearning, forever hungry for your form. I see the light at tunnel’s end ~ My mind a funnel, I want to fly! 10/10/19 For Make it Seven Poetry Contest Sponsored by Joseph May (picture #2)

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Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 10/28/2019 10:48:00 AM

This is fantastic. Congratulations. Kind wishes, Kai

Hello There
Date: 10/28/2019 12:46:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kai ~ I really appreciate your visit and kind words :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/22/2019 5:04:00 PM

your uniqueness paid off. BIG congrats at the top!

Hello There
Date: 10/22/2019 7:37:00 PM

Whew! Thank you so much, Andrea ~ so pleased it did :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/21/2019 2:34:00 PM

You shine my friend at the TOP of #1 on winner's list..back with congrats on your super win.

Hello There
Date: 10/21/2019 4:43:00 PM

Aw, a heartfelt thank you, my friend...

Paul Callus

Date: 10/21/2019 9:03:00 AM

Romantic and flavoured with passion. A creative take on the chosen picture. Congratulations on placing first! Regards // paul

Hello There
Date: 10/21/2019 12:51:00 PM

Thank you very much, Paul, for your kind words and congratulations ~ I appreciate it :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/21/2019 7:07:00 AM

I see this one flew to the top spot in the contest. : ) Congrats my friend. Beautifully done.

Hello There
Date: 10/21/2019 12:50:00 PM

Thank you, Chris ~ I'm so happy for that. It was fun to go there with this :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/21/2019 5:24:00 AM

I LOVE your interpretation of the image, :-) Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Hello There
Date: 10/21/2019 12:49:00 PM

Thank you so much, JAN :) I really appreciate the feedback :) hugs

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/20/2019 6:32:00 PM

i told you this would be at the top, congratulations of your first place win my friend :) hugs

Hello There
Date: 10/20/2019 11:18:00 PM

You did say that, didn't you? lol. Thank you, Sandy, for all of your support and encouragement ~ I really appreciate it :) hugs

Joseph May

Date: 10/20/2019 6:32:00 PM

Beautifully penned HT, Congrats on your win

Hello There
Date: 10/20/2019 11:17:00 PM

Thank you soooo much, Joseph! I'm thrilled and honored to have placed in your contest ~ Thank you for the challenge and for considering this worthy amongst so many talented poets here on poetrysoup :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2019 3:29:00 PM

you really interpreted this one differently from how I would have by the way you did your repeated lines. SOUPER job, HT!! I think it will soar in the contest.

Hello There
Date: 10/15/2019 4:00:00 PM

Thank you so very much, my friend!!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/11/2019 4:38:00 PM

A sensuous write told in 7 lines - beautiful imagery and a great rhyme and rhythm to this creative write - well penned Hello There, Hugs, Jennifer.

Hello There
Date: 10/11/2019 6:15:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jennifer :) I really appreciate it ~ hugs :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/11/2019 8:32:00 AM

You have made it a sizzling seven. Good luck in the contest. I expect this will do well.

Hello There
Date: 10/11/2019 11:12:00 AM

Thank you, Richard ~ I'm so glad you enjoyed this :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/11/2019 1:10:00 AM

This is amazing. I love it - You've written a true inspiration and dreamy poem. It's just wonderful. God bless you with many more. Love and prayers, Gina

Hello There
Date: 10/11/2019 11:10:00 AM

Thank you so very much, my friend <3

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/10/2019 6:35:00 PM

this is a gorgeous write for this image my friend, your rhythm in this one is perfect, word choices excellent...i am sure this one will be at the top of the list...:) hugs love it

Hello There
Date: 10/10/2019 7:36:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sandy!! I really appreciate it :) hugs, my friend

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/10/2019 5:23:00 PM

This is a superb depiction of the photo, HT..a wonderful rhythm to your rhymes..excellent write.

Hello There
Date: 10/10/2019 6:12:00 PM

Gosh, Vijay, I am thrilled that you think so ~ whew! Thank you so very much, my friend...

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/10/2019 2:56:00 PM

This is so nice to read this afternoon! Beautiful HT! :)

Hello There
Date: 10/10/2019 6:10:00 PM

Thank you so much, Heidi! :)

Chris Green

Date: 10/10/2019 2:45:00 PM

I don't know about them but this sure did make me sigh. I loved this. This poem has it's own melody that moves so smoothly throughout the lines. The theme is wonderful as well because love is something very special. Fly on my friend, spread your poetic wings and fly.

Hello There
Date: 10/10/2019 6:09:00 PM

Thank you so much, Chris ~ It means a lot to me that you shared your feedback on this. The premise may not be obvious but the elements in the picture are included, in a slightly different way. Thanks again, my friend.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/10/2019 1:33:00 PM

Oh wonderful flow and rhythm! Lovely poem. Good luck in the contest. xomo

Hello There
Date: 10/10/2019 4:09:00 PM

Thank you very much, Maureen! :)