Sara Kendrick Poet Quatrain

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At Times

Storms, those storms, do appear
At times with thunderous roar
Sweeping through darkened skies
That shake the earth to its core

Dark clouds like mourner's cloaks
Gather, charcoal gray despair
Lightning flashes, dances across
A blackened atmosphere

They've unleashed their fury
Send down torrential rain
Dripped-dropped upon rooftops
Raising up angry Cain     

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Jennifer Proxenos January 13, 2024 at 10:24 AM typical description of a storm, but what i thought was great about the anger of the storm is that you compared it to 'Raising up angry Cain.' Hope you are keeping well. Blessings and hugs, Jennifer. Sara Kendrick January 13, 2024 at 12:23 PM Why, thank you, Jennifer. Sometimes there is anger inside just like what seems to be going on in a storm. Thanks for the nice review of my work. I am well after a really bad night. I need all the blessings I can get. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich January 13, 2024 at 8:31 AM oh nice. If for the quatrain contest, I think it has a great chance to win Sara Kendrick January 13, 2024 at 12:21 PM Andrea, I really haven't looked at the contest so I did not write it for a contest. LOL..Thanks for letting me know anyway. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith January 12, 2024 at 1:47 PM I enjoyed your wonderful "At Times" write/ending. I have been in many really bad storms. I remember one time my dad opened the car door and water came running out. Stay safe... Have a blessed day writing away............... Sara Kendrick January 12, 2024 at 3:12 PM Paula, That was some deep water for the water to be running through the car. I don't think it has been that bad here except in low lying places and flood prone areas. Thanks for the visit and taking time to comment. Sara K

Silent One January 12, 2024 at 10:57 AM I am the storm... and like an eagle I soar above them.. I like how you did this. I'm seeing a lot of storm poems today.. Sara Kendrick January 12, 2024 at 12:04 PM SO, It seems that they keep coming but we have been okay. Thanks for the visits to all of them and suffering through reading them. Sara K

Vijay Pandit January 12, 2024 at 6:22 AM Lovely tone and flow and wonderful imagery, Sara. Just like your photo, your poem paints nature's fury. Sara Kendrick January 12, 2024 at 6:44 AM Why, thank you, Vijay. I appreciate the visit and kind review. Sara K

Ink Empress January 12, 2024 at 1:12 AM I always get really scared when theres thunderstorms. And its been pretty stormy here too. Your quatrain flows so well and is so well written. So descriptive and picturesque. I can see lightning dancing and flashing through your words. Sending you light always. Sara Kendrick January 12, 2024 at 4:17 AM Why, thank you, IE. Sometimes our fear can be made worse when possibly our parents, teachers, or our grandparents have been overly cautious in the face of storms. And if a person ever experiences a really bad one there is reason to be afraid and extremely cautious from then on. Thank you for your visit and nice comments. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues January 11, 2024 at 3:33 PM A great storm…we love them…we fear them! Sara Kendrick January 12, 2024 at 4:15 AM Kim, mixed emotions for sure when they come sometimes some terrible destruction, sometimes injuries, and sometimes death. Thanks for dropping by . Sara K

Regina Elliott January 11, 2024 at 1:05 PM Wondrous storm poem, Sara. It reminds me of the summer storms we have here in North Carolina. Have a splendid evening. ~ Sara Kendrick January 11, 2024 at 1:26 PM Regina, one exception it is winter and it is cold air coming through pulling up warm air from the Gulf which brings the rain then cold air is falling in behind it. The situation can create tornadoes in the winter. Thanks for dropping by and for the nice review of my work. Sara K

Howard Kerr January 11, 2024 at 12:40 PM Sara, A peerless atmospheric work that is dark, deep and sincerely heartfelt at every turn. Stirring imagery unleashed allied to consistent theme. Many thanks for your recent visit to my page Howard Sara Kendrick January 11, 2024 at 1:23 PM Why, thank you, Howard. I appreciate the complimentary review of my work. Your visit is encouraging. Sara K