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At the Zoo

At 
the zoo
you
will find
animals
of all
kinds:
Lions,
tigers, bears,
elephants and
kangaroos.
Oh! What 
fun
to see!
Hey, look! That
monkey
looks
just like
you!

Copyright © Kim Merryman | Year Posted 2015

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Maurice Rigoler

June 27, 2016 at 2:20 PM

Love the last lines, but don't you think you insulted the poor monkey by comparing him to someone you know? Haha. Thank you for stopping by. / M

July 4, 2016 at 4:05 PM

Thanks, Maurice! I didn't think about insulting the monkey. Poor monkey!

Andrea Dietrich

June 20, 2015 at 6:24 PM

this is adorable. didn't it make the winners' list. I really like it!!

June 20, 2015 at 8:36 PM

Actually it was never in a contest but I did refer to it as an example for my waltz wave contest. I'm glad you liked it, Andrea! Thanks for stopping by. I always appreciate your comments.

Dorian Petersen Potter

June 19, 2015 at 1:39 AM

Very nice pen Kim! It was fun to read it dear friend.Very cute!:)A 7! Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:) D.

June 20, 2015 at 8:38 PM

Thank you, Dorian and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Wishing you a lovely weekend also! Love, Kim

June 13, 2015 at 8:36 PM

That's a good one, Kim. This is a tricky and of course, enjoyable format.

June 18, 2015 at 8:25 PM

Thanks, David!

Connie Marcum Wong

June 11, 2015 at 9:32 PM

Hi Kim, this poem made me laugh at its ending. Very cute!

June 11, 2015 at 10:43 AM

A fountain of fun phases that bring humor and magic to the page. A well written waltz. Emile. #7

June 11, 2015 at 9:02 PM

Thank you, Emile! I felt like being silly!

June 11, 2015 at 10:04 AM

HOHO!! THIS IS AMZING!! I LOVED IT!! :D :D

June 11, 2015 at 9:01 PM

So glad you liked it, Sneha! I was just being silly when I wrote it. Thanks for stopping by!

Constance La France

June 10, 2015 at 7:16 AM

Kim, loving the waltzing wave in your sweet poem, well done 7, and thanks for the inspiration

June 11, 2015 at 8:59 PM

Thank you, Constance!

June 9, 2015 at 8:41 PM

G'day Kim... be careful its not a mirror you're looking at. Yes, a zoo is a fun place to be - thanks Kim - Lindsay

June 11, 2015 at 8:57 PM

Ha! Ha! Thanks for stopping by, Lindsay!

June 9, 2015 at 11:15 AM

giggling here, kim... you're so funny!.. huggs

June 11, 2015 at 8:53 PM

Thanks, Nette! Just being silly!

June 9, 2015 at 10:05 AM

You made me giggle Kim....lovely Tim

June 9, 2015 at 10:44 AM

Thanks for commenting, Tim! I was just being silly with this one.

June 9, 2015 at 1:19 AM

ha ha ha love the ending Kim:-) Hugs Jan xx

June 9, 2015 at 10:45 AM

Thanks, Jan! I was just being silly with this one.

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