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At the Waters' Edge

Soft tinkle of the stream Took me from my doze I cupped the precious water Drank deeply In its’ midst I spied a gleam Silvery stars Shimmered below the waters’ surface Such liquidity In water Running free I put my face in to the stream The stars I could see In another world In another dream At the waters’ edge Stars flowed in Stars flowed out Gentle tide That took me In liquidity To places I could never hide

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/21/2009 3:55:00 PM
Liked the images alot. I think the double spacings very distracting? Light & Love
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Date: 6/10/2009 10:29:00 AM
You have a unique style that im very quickly taking to. keep it up matthew ^^ Peace. Forever Booboo
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