At the Stars

Light glitters on us
A romantic night it was
We're one with the stars
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Winter Avatar
July 14, 2008 at 8:01 AM
Inspiring and beautiful. I have felt that way many times myself. So well expressed. Love, Shar
Jordan Avatar
July 14, 2008 at 3:38 AM
Another beautiful haiku - I don't mean to be rude but on the last line you need to take out the are - I really enjoyed the poem - your quite gifted with this form - best wishes
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