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At the Speed of Light

From the wet sodden ground
two leaves in her palm 
are rescued as if she's found jewels.
Reflecting the light, they are covered with pearls
of glistening dew from the dawn

She fondles them gently. A smile on her face
Examining slowly, she will turn them around,
like pieces of gold she has found
A moment like this, has suspending all time
            A moment that's clearly sublime

The soft light of morning halos her hair,
to circle her curls, while framing her face
Crowning the moment with Chantilly lace
and swelling my heart with a small trace of pain

My soul is imploding with love for this child...
Yet, shadowing slowly is a knowing, somehow,
that all things so fragile will last just awhile
I know somewhere out there,
      a star's gone awry,
A stray shooting star has traveled in line...
      to fracture the shell of this instant in time
So quickly it comes, from the selvage of night
Faster it comes, than the tempo of light
                   to shatter such moments divine

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1/16/17
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Marcum Wong Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 3:33 PM
This is a master's stunning work of art Carrie. Congratulations on your wonderful win! 7 ; )
Dietrich Avatar
May 10, 2017 at 7:27 PM
Fantastic as always, Carrie. It makes me wonder what you reworked to make it even better than it probably already was! Congrats on a well deserved win.
May Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 9:40 PM
A stellar write...Congrats on your win
Parker Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 6:26 PM
congratulations Carrie such a beautiful picture of love
Smith Avatar
May 8, 2017 at 11:13 AM
Wonderful art Carrie, congratulations...
Yvonne Avatar
January 23, 2017 at 1:04 PM
Great take on this challenge! A seven!
Rycroft Avatar
January 18, 2017 at 4:33 PM
Beautiful poem Carrie x
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