At the Seaside

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A quiet 
but windy day 
at the seaside.

A family's out
lounging
in the morning sun;
one of the children
excitedly 
look for shells.

A surfer yonder
is riding the waves 
unceasingly splashing 
against the rocks
exploding 
like a tossed grenade;

taking it all in
at daybreak
a lifeguard on duty


Date written: 03/29/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 3/29/2020 6:56:00 PM
Hello Edward, this poem makes me feel like i should be at the beach. It is cold here today. I hope it is warmer tomorrow. Be strong, be well, Stay well. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/30/2020 8:03:00 AM
Hello Edward, your right on a cold day the beach is not a place to be. Enjoy your day my friend. Stay safe, be healthy, Be strong.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/29/2020 7:37:00 PM
The beach is an awful place to be when it's cold out, Darlene:-) It's best to wait for a sunny day. You stay well too, my friend.
Date: 3/29/2020 10:21:00 AM
Like a watch tower the life guard stand...A nice feeling to this one...
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/29/2020 12:03:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo:-) Stay well and safe out there!
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