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At the Rainbow

at the glossed rainbow
sky and grass held varied hues
bright days were foreseen

vast mood umbrella
nature's smile turned upside down
in green ecstasy

from the stained rainbow
I saw teal world was changing
and pink flowers smiled

in gold altered mists
I found my happy outlook
sizzling saffron sun

beautifulchangeflowerhappinessnaturehaiku

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Paula Goldsmith

January 19, 2024 at 1:46 PM

A wonderful/colorful ~ write/picture. Have a blessed weekend.................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 19, 2024 at 5:33 PM

I appreciate the happy thoughts and well wishes. Kindest regards. :)

Christina Bowring

January 12, 2024 at 4:42 PM

Dear sweet Evelyn, this is simply stunning my lovely, so talented friend. What artistic skill to create such awe inspiring haiku’s. The imagery is breathtaking and your skilled use of colour is as bright as any rainbow! You are amazing at creating short forms and inspiring. I couldn’t do it. Divine dear one. Divine. Loved it! I hope you have had a wonderful start to the new year. Keep inspiring … hugs and smiles to you :):)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 12, 2024 at 9:26 PM

Dear friend, your kind words make my heart sing. I am so pleased to have created a poem you enjoy. Thank you for your comments, which are so heartwarming. Blessings and hugs. :):)

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 7, 2024 at 1:14 PM

- Excellent written all four ... I love the last one, Evelyn :) - I wish you a happy new year :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 7, 2024 at 1:18 PM

I'm glad you enjoyed these haikus, Anne-Lise. Thank you for the smiles. :) hugs

Maria Fernandez-Garcia

January 5, 2024 at 5:31 PM

My dear Evelyn. This is awesone to my eyes. A full rainbow to look at. Evelyn, you mixed feelings with a nice picture to look at you.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 6, 2024 at 10:46 PM

Thank you so much for your kind appreciation, dear friend. I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it.

Hiya Sharma

January 4, 2024 at 7:30 PM

Oh wow, dear Evelyn, I absolutely love this haiku poem, so beautifully adorns the hues of nature and its imagery, combining everything so beautifully with a heavenly confluence of colours and artistic depth.. How majestically you've described the glory of a rainbow, as a different kind of nature's smile.. "sky and grass held varied hues", "nature's smile turned upside down in green ecstasy", "sizzling saffron sun" Ahh, that last haiku is truly mesmerizing, you really have a golden quill and a

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 5, 2024 at 2:56 PM

Thank you for your comments, that are so very kind, dear friend. I'm so delighted by your spirit lifting words of appreciation. Thank you for letting me know of your pleasure in this poem, and also for your inspiring FAV. :)

Hiya Sharma

January 4, 2024 at 7:31 PM

golden heart! Really enjoyed reading this poem, so deserving of all the appreciation.. Sending you many best wishes, love and light~ this is another FAV from you :)

Gershon Wolf

January 4, 2024 at 7:13 PM

Second stanza really does it for me. What an imagination you have. Stunning!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 5, 2024 at 2:47 PM

Thank you for your very gladdening remarks. Happy New Year!

Silent One

January 4, 2024 at 11:37 AM

You really know how to create imagery through you words and you do short forms so well.. love them all, especially the last one..

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 4, 2024 at 4:00 PM

Thank you for your fine compliments. I'm so happy that you loved these haikus. :)

Sam Kauffman

January 4, 2024 at 10:08 AM

"Green ecstasy," "sizzling saffron," "teal world" - a rainbow of delights, Evelyn! Happiness captured in technicolor! A beautiful way to start 2024. Thank you for these moments of beauty! Blessings of health and happiness to you!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

January 4, 2024 at 3:55 PM

Thank you for creating smiles that linger, with your delightful remarks. :)