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At the Pond

A moody spring breeze playing in the brown cattails; heat waves dancing on water. Dragonfly hovers watching a turtle glide by; a water snake’s making waves. Written 5-9-19

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/11/2019 3:30:00 PM

great picturing of the activity in the pond! Congrats for your win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/10/2019 1:36:00 PM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, that gives me a beautiful picture M.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser
Date: 6/11/2019 8:27:00 AM

Thanks so much.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/15/2019 1:21:00 AM

I feel like I am there, watching, admiring that water snake.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/17/2019 12:25:00 PM

Good, thanks.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/14/2019 8:15:00 AM

Great imagery. You painted a perfect picture with so few words.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/14/2019 9:59:00 AM

Thanks.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/12/2019 2:51:00 PM

Oh, wonder! So much better than Walden Pond and all the rest of the pretenders. You have really nailed this descriptive poem! A FAVE for me. Bravo! :) gw

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/13/2019 3:44:00 PM

Wow, thanks so much!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/9/2019 3:47:00 PM

You put us right in the scene! Nicely done. Very calming and pretty imagery.

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/13/2019 3:45:00 PM

Thank you.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/9/2019 6:59:00 AM

Beautiful imagery!

M. L. Kiser
Date: 5/9/2019 11:47:00 AM

Thank you.