At the Pond

A moody spring breeze playing in the brown cattails; heat waves dancing on water. Dragonfly hovers watching a turtle glide by; a water snake’s making waves.
Written 5-9-19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 3:30 PM
great picturing of the activity in the pond! Congrats for your win.
Andresen Avatar
June 10, 2019 at 1:36 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poem, that gives me a beautiful picture M.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kiser Avatar
June 11, 2019 at 8:27 AM
Thanks so much.
Krutsinger Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 1:21 AM
I feel like I am there, watching, admiring that water snake.
Kiser Avatar
May 17, 2019 at 12:25 PM
Good, thanks.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 8:15 AM
Great imagery. You painted a perfect picture with so few words.
Kiser Avatar
May 14, 2019 at 9:59 AM
Thanks.
Wolf Avatar
May 12, 2019 at 2:51 PM
Oh, wonder! So much better than Walden Pond and all the rest of the pretenders. You have really nailed this descriptive poem! A FAVE for me. Bravo! :) gw
Kiser Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 3:44 PM
Wow, thanks so much!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 3:47 PM
You put us right in the scene! Nicely done. Very calming and pretty imagery.
Kiser Avatar
May 13, 2019 at 3:45 PM
Thank you.
Pandit Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 6:59 AM
Beautiful imagery!
Kiser Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 11:47 AM
Thank you.
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